【題目】假定你是李華,是一名高一的學生,自從進入高中學習以來你媽媽不允許你上網(wǎng),她認為上網(wǎng)不僅浪費時間還耽誤學習。你不同意她的看法,為此你感到很苦惱。請你用英語寫一封信向校英語報的編輯王老師求助。

注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名或地名;

2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.詞數(shù)100左右。書信開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Wang,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior I student in our school, I’m sorry to disturb you, but I have to write to ask you for help, hoping you will be so kind to help me.

Ever since I came into Senior high, my mother hasn’t allowed me to surf the Internet. In her opinion, it is a waste of time to surf the Internet and it also affects my study. However, I don’t agree with her, the Internet makes it convenient for me to easily find the information I need; besides, if I meet with problems in my study I can solve them through the Internet, which helps me a lot. Also I can share something that worries me with my friends, which reduces my stress. Faced with my mother’s strong attitude. What should I do? I really need your help!

I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on it. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累,寫作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點點評】

本文是一篇求助信,語氣委婉誠懇,表達簡單明了。作者清楚地表達了自己的想法并提出了要求。在語言的使用上,使用了一些靈活的句式。①使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語;②句使用了時間狀語從句③句轉(zhuǎn)折連詞的使用語氣貼切并使用了形式賓語it;④⑤句使用了狀語從句和定語從句,不僅讓行文有節(jié)奏感,也使得信息濃度高。⑦句句型would appreciate it if的使用語氣委婉客氣。

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