Question

王紅想利用高考結(jié)束到大學(xué)入學(xué)前這段時(shí)間打工，下面是她的一份求職簡(jiǎn)表，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該表提供的內(nèi)容替她寫一份120詞左右的自薦信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

注意：1、詞數(shù)：120—150；
2、參考詞匯：①兼職工作：a part-time job;       ②導(dǎo)游：a travel guide;
③做過(guò)，擔(dān)任：worked as;     ④受到好評(píng)：be highly praised for;
⑤新泰市文化路36號(hào)：36 Culture Road Xintai
⑥郵編：post code
Dear manager,
I hope to apply for a job in your company during this summer vacation. Please allow me to introduce myself.
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong

Answer 1

Dear manager,
I hope to apply for a job in your company during this summer vacation. Please allow me to introduce myself.
My name is Wang Hong, female. I was born in Xintai, Shandong Province, on November, 22^nd, 1996. I’ve just graduated from Xintai No.2 Middle School. Since it will be over two months before I go to university, I want to find a part-time job and I hope to be a travel guide in your company. I enjoy working with people together. I am young, strong and helpful. I can speak English pretty well. I’m very interested in traveling and especially know many beautiful places in Taian quite well. I once worked as a tourist guide for a month and was highly praised for my good service. I’m sure I am qualified for the job.
If you hire me, please call me at 0538—7642254 or write to me at this address: 36 Culture Road, Xintai, Shandong Province and the post code is 271200.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong

試題分析;本文考查了自薦信，介紹自己的具體情況。審題時(shí)注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以第一人稱為主。寫作時(shí)注意語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯搭配。要盡量使用高級(jí)的詞匯和高級(jí)的句型讓文章更有層次，同時(shí)使用合適的連接詞讓各要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的短文，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，只要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯即可，要求考生注意審題中的人稱和試題，注意寫作的細(xì)節(jié)如語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，注意使用連接詞和高級(jí)詞匯詞組，讓文章更有層次和文采。