Question

最近，某中學生英文報開設了“After-class Activities”的欄目，請你根據以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學們積極參加課外活動。
1.你校開展課外活動的情況；
2.你參加過的課外活動及給你帶來的益處
3.為同學選擇課外活動提出建議
4. 為學校開展課外活動提出建議
注意：
1.詞數100左右；
2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名
3.稿件的開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.From joozone.com.
Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.

本作文為提綱式的稿件文章，立意為鼓勵學生積極參加課外活動，這個話題考生比較熟悉，有話可說，有感可寫。根據所給提綱，學生的寫作思路會比較清晰，分別從開展課外活動的情況、益處、為同學選擇提建議以及為學校開展活動提建議，框架清晰，思路明確。主要考察學生英語的基本功和組織自己觀點、給出理由進行闡述的能力，考查范圍比較綜合。提綱式作文要注意文章之間的邏輯關系，比如這篇文章中因果關系的闡述，考生不宜直接堆砌觀點，要有理有據，文章的承轉得當，長短句結合，綜合多種語法和豐富詞匯的選擇，在不遺漏要點的情況下適當發(fā)揮，給出合理化的原因和建議。總的來說，今年四川卷的作文中規(guī)中矩，考察面廣，不僅考察考生的語言水平，也考察了行文構思和邏輯。