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基礎(chǔ)寫作
廣州某電視臺打算開辦一個面向中學生觀眾的英文節(jié)目，新聘任了來自英國的John作為節(jié)目編輯助理�，F(xiàn)在，John就有關(guān)節(jié)目的內(nèi)容向廣大中學生征求意見。你是廣州某高中的學生李華，建議開辦“廣州全接觸”（All-around Guangzhou）節(jié)目。請根據(jù)以下你的節(jié)目設(shè)想給John寫信建議開辦該節(jié)目：
【寫作內(nèi)容】

節(jié)目內(nèi)容：介紹廣州的歷史、教育名人、著名景點、飲食。 播出時間：每周六、日下午，方便學生周末觀看。 其他設(shè)想：邀請中學生參加節(jié)目，提高學生的收看興趣。 理由：1）中學生可更多地了解廣州文化，在亞運會期間向外國游客介紹廣州； 2）有助于提高中學生的英文水平。 預(yù)期：將會受到中學生的歡迎。

【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；
書信開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計算在5個句子中。
【評分標準】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Dear John,
I know you’re going to have an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program ---- “ All-around Guangzhou”.
I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.
Sincerely yours’
Li Hua

Answer 1

 
Dear John,
I know you’re going to have an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program ---- “ All-around Guangzhou”.
This program will cover topics like the history, education, scenic spots, foods and famous people of Guangzhou. It should be broadcast on Saturday and Sunday afternoons so that we students can have the chance to watch it. Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse the other students’ interest in it. This program will not only get students to know about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors during the 2010 Asian Games, but also help them improve their English. I am sure it will be well-received by middle school students.
I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.
Sincerely yours’
Li Hua

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