Question

就"現(xiàn)代師生關(guān)系"這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法,并包括如下點(diǎn):
1你是否愿意告訴老師你內(nèi)心的想法?為什么? 
2你希望你與你老師之間關(guān)系怎樣?如何才能建立這種關(guān)系?
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Answer 1

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The relationship between a teacher and a student can be either good or bad, helpful or harmfuh. Either way, the relationship can affect the student for the rest of his life. A good teacher-student relationship will make learning enjoyable and well mutually understandable. Whereas, a hard relationship can discourage the student from learning and make teaching an unpleasant task.
In order to have a good teacher-student relationship, it is important that the teacher and the student respect each other. The teacher does not have to force the student to learn. In fact, many students will often work hard simply because they respect their teachers and want to please them. The teacher should motivate and encourage the student without forcing him.
He needs patience and understanding. Learning can be fun when the student has the right attitude towards it. As for the student,he must always show the teacher proper respect. He should be eager to learn and willing to work hard. It is also important to listen carefully and pay attention. Otherwise he would not be able to profit fully from his teacher's knowledge and assistance.
In conclusion, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutually heneficiah The student gains knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.

試題分析：英語(yǔ)寫作首先要仔細(xì)審題，確定人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，文體。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。我們?cè)趯懽髦袘?yīng)當(dāng)遵循語(yǔ)言表述的經(jīng)濟(jì)原則，即用盡可能少的形式表達(dá)盡可能多的語(yǔ)義內(nèi)容，力求簡(jiǎn)潔精練。由于對(duì)英語(yǔ)詞匯了解和掌握有限，再加上母語(yǔ)對(duì)我們思維的影響，寫作中常會(huì)出現(xiàn)贅詞和冗繁的問題。贅詞是指使用了不必要的詞語(yǔ)。這些詞語(yǔ)只是用來“填空、充數(shù)”的，沒有增加任何新的意義；冗繁是指對(duì)讀者來說不十分必要的信息，或句子中重復(fù)的詞語(yǔ)。贅詞和冗繁使句子結(jié)構(gòu)松松垮垮，使文章冗長(zhǎng)、拖沓。因此，我們應(yīng)該在用詞上仔細(xì)揣摩，準(zhǔn)確清晰地表達(dá)我們的思想，剔除冗詞贅語(yǔ)，使文章言簡(jiǎn)意賅。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句。考試時(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。