Question

第三節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter給你發(fā)來E-mail尋求幫助。請根據(jù)E-mail內(nèi)容、寫作要點和寫作要求回信。
Dear Li Hua,
My mom and dad have a rule for their kids: You get all A’s in your exams or you’re out．I’m only 18, I do my homework and try my best, but I feel the pressure from them and I worry about what it’s doing to me．I wonder what it is like in your family．What should I do?
Yours
Peter
寫作要點：
告訴Peter你的情況（不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校、家庭地址等信息）；
給Peter提出解決問題的具體建議。
寫作要求：
詞數(shù)100以上（不含寫好的部分）；
內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；
書寫清晰、工整。
Dear Peter,
I’m surprised this kind of thing should happen in your country…
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Answer 1

One possible version;
Dear Peter,
I’m surprised this kind of thing should happen in your country. Here in China parents usually take their children to all kinds of crash courses after class, which are supposed to help them get top grades in all exams. But in my family my parents treat me as their friend and won’t put too much pressure on me and allow me to develop my own interest in art, music and sports. So I’m pretty lucky in this aspect. I suggest that you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents and tell them that they should set high standards, reward achievement but not punish poor performance. I’m sure they will understand you sooner or later.
Yours
Li Hua

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