Question

VII：書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分20分）
國(guó)內(nèi)某家英文報(bào)紙?jiān)O(shè)有一個(gè)求助信箱（Dr. Helper’s Mailbox）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一份學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀中列出的部分信息，以高三學(xué)生王勇的名義，用英語(yǔ)給Dr. Helper寫(xiě)一封短信。
學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀：
1. 每日在校時(shí)間9個(gè)小時(shí)；         2. 每日作業(yè)時(shí)間3到4個(gè)小時(shí)；
3. 幾乎沒(méi)有課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間；         4. 每日睡眠時(shí)間不足。
負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重原因：
考試壓力大，作業(yè)多，家長(zhǎng)期望高。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 參考詞匯：負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重(overload); 壓力 (pressure); 期望(expectations)
Dear Dr Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.
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I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong

Answer 1

Dear Dr Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day, I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do what we like. Besides, we don’t have enough sleep.
There seems to be three causes for the overload: the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations from the parents. We are often warned that if we didn’t try our best, we would not have the chance to go to university.
I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong

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