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文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除 或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\ ) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

           Mr and Mrs Smith are my neighbors. They lived in the neighborhood for over twenty years. Therefore,yesterday they told me they were moving. I was really surprised and immediate asked them why we wanted to move. Mr Smith said, uGina and I all have hobbies we want to work on them. But we were so busy at our work that we didn，t have time for them. We used to living our life doing ‘what we have to do/ But now we have decided to work on 'what we want to do.’ ” After hear what he said,I thought they have made the right decision.

31. They lived in …            lived 前加 have

32. Therefore,yesterday …      Therefore → However

33. …immediate asked …        immediate → immediately

34. …why we wanted …          we → they

35. . .. and I all...           all → both

36. . .. work on them.          去掉 them

37. ...so busy at...            at → with

38. . .. used to living ...     living → live

39. After hear what...          hear → hearing

40. …they have made …         have → had

題目來(lái)源：2016年英語(yǔ)周報(bào)高二新課程 > 第35期 2015-2016學(xué)年高二新課程

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