Question

閱讀下面一則網(wǎng)絡(luò)帖子，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文，作為跟帖。

Hello there,

I’m writing to ask you for help. It’s really urgent because I’m considering running away from home. I feel like there's no way to fix the problem with my mother.

Yesterday evening, we had a heated argument at home after I got home a bit late again.

I had been at my friend’s birthday party. I explained it to her but she just didn’t believe me.

I do know my mother loves me very much and she wants me around every day, or even every minute.

But the fact is that I am 17 years and have my own life style. I am my parents’ only child and my mother says she wants me to have the best possible chance of happiness in the future. She is always telling me to behave well when I leave home or go out. What’s worse, whenever there is a cold war between my mother and me, my father often keeps silent. I am not only confused but also hurt. I don't know what to say or what to do to make things right. I think they are out of fashion and too old to know my inner part.

To tell the truth, I have packed up my backpack but am still at a loss.

Kate

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點;

2. 然后以約120個詞就Kate遇到的困惑發(fā)表看法，并包括如下要點:

(1) 你認為Kate是否應(yīng)該離家出走，為什么？

(2) 給Kate提出至少2－3點建議。

[寫作要求]

可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

[評分標準]

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

One possible version:

I’m sorry to hear that you are not getting on well with your mother and that you are considering running away from home after you quarreled with her. But you haven’t made up your mind to leave.

Most teenagers do not like to be restricted and treated like children. But there are many dangers involved in running away. Alone in a strange city or on the street, a teen is an easy target for thieves and other criminals.

In my eyes, trust and communication are of great importance. Why don’t you try to break the ice by talking to your mother about your emotions?

Secondly, know how to calm yourself down after you're upset. Maybe you need to run around outside, listen to music, or draw. Do whatever safe things you need to do to feel better.

You can also get some help from trusted adults -- someone like your teacher, or neighbor. Know who you can depend on to support and help you.

解析:

1. 分概括及寫作兩部分評分，然后相加再給出該題總分。

2. 概括部分的要點: a. 與母親爭吵;   b. 想離家出走。 缺少任何一個要點酌情扣1-2分。

3. 寫作部分按0分、1-3分、4-6分、7-10分、11-13分、14-17分和18-20七檔給分，根據(jù)語法和內(nèi)容要點情況酌情給分。

●內(nèi)容要點： a. 是否該離家出走，并給出原因；b. 2－3點建議。