Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
During the past years of high school, I have had a lot of unforgettable
experience. One of them when my class prepared to a group singing competition of our
school. In order to win competition, we went all out for it. During the two weeks before
the competition, we use every chance to practice singing in our free time, and our music
teacher offered to helping us improve our singing skills. Although the job needed lots of
time and patience, but every participant took it serious and did their best. Thank to our
hard work, we won first prize. Hearing the excited news, we were all wild with joy. The
moment we got the prize, an old say hit y mind ----No pains, no gains.

Answer 1

【小題1】experience改為experiences
【小題2】to 改為 for
【小題3】win后面加the
【小題4】use改為 used
【小題5】helping改為help
【小題6】but去掉
【小題7】serious 改為seriously
【小題8】Thank改為Thanks
【小題9】excited 改為exciting
【小題10】say 改為 saying

解析試題分析：
【小題1】這里的experience是“經(jīng)歷”的意思，是可數(shù)名詞，改為experiences
【小題2】考查詞組：prepare for為…做準(zhǔn)備，to 改為 for
【小題3】這里是特指這場(chǎng)歌唱比賽，win后面加the
【小題4】這篇文章用的是過去時(shí)：use改為 used
【小題5】考查詞組：offer to do sth主動(dòng)提出做…,helping改為help
【小題6】Although 不能和but連用，but去掉
【小題7】考查詞組：take sth seriously認(rèn)真對(duì)待…。
【小題8】考查詞組： Thanks to多虧了
【小題9】考查形容詞：修飾news用exciting
【小題10】考查名詞：saying說法，an old saying一句俗語：say 改為 saying
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考查考生對(duì)全文的理解和在上下文中運(yùn)用語法的能力和上下文串聯(lián)的理解力。特別是名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，形容詞副詞的變化和固定搭配。