Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) (∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線 (\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:

1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

The summer holiday is coming. Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenience and comfortable. What’s more, they can to save money for other purposes. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world. Besides, others prefer to go out for traveling, that can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money or meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much good to stay at home, for I can do how I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and help my parents with the housework.

Answer 1

【答案】

The summer holiday is coming. Our has a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both and comfortable. What’s more, they can to save money for other purposes. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world. , others prefer to go out for traveling, can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much to stay at home, for I can do I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and my parents with the housework.

【解析】

第一處：主語(yǔ)是Our class，這里表示班級(jí)的同學(xué)，表示復(fù)數(shù)概念，謂語(yǔ)用復(fù)數(shù)。故has改成have。

第二處：和comfortable并列作表語(yǔ)。故convenience改成convenient。

第三處：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后直接跟動(dòng)詞原形，所以刪除to。

第四處：特指＂了解外面世界的機(jī)會(huì)＂，用定冠詞。故lose后面接the。

第五處：句意：然而，其他人更喜歡出去旅游。表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而且和后面的句子有逗號(hào)隔開，用副詞。故Besides改成However。

第六處：引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，指代前面的句子，用關(guān)系代詞which。

第七處：他們會(huì)花費(fèi)更多的錢和遇到一些困難。表示并列關(guān)系，用and。

第八處：much修飾形容詞比較級(jí)。故good改成better。

第九處：do后面是賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句缺少賓語(yǔ)，用what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。故how改成what。

第十處：和reading books, watching TV并列作賓語(yǔ)應(yīng)用動(dòng)名詞。故help改成helping。