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根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，符合邏輯的英文文段．

所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐字翻譯．(字?jǐn)?shù)60～80)提示：假如你是李雷，現(xiàn)在你給你的英國(guó)朋友Jim寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他你和同學(xué)們上周日去香山公園郊游的活動(dòng)的感受．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出．

你們?cè)缟掀唿c(diǎn)鐘在學(xué)校門(mén)口集合，大約八點(diǎn)鐘到達(dá)香山公園……

meet, arrive, at the foot of the hill, have a party, play games, climb, on the top of, see, how, beautiful, feel proud(自豪的), live Beijing, the 2008 Olympic Games, hold

　　Dear Jim,

　　Last Sunday my classmates and I want to Xiangshan Park, I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Lei

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學(xué)生：習(xí)作： 　　Dear Jim, 　　Last Sunday my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park, we met at school gate at 7:00 in the morning. We arrived at the foot of the hill at about 8:00. We have a party(X1) and play games(X2) after we climbed the hill. On the top of the hill, I have a wonderful view(X3). How beautiful Beijing is! I felt proud because I live(X4) Beijing. And the 2008 Olympic games hold(X5) in Beijing. 　　I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. 　　Best wishes! Yours, Li Lei 　　剖析：1．有了過(guò)去的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last Sunday動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以have→had． 　　4．live為不及物動(dòng)詞，不能跟賓語(yǔ)Beijing，因此要在live后加in． 　　5．此處為一般將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，應(yīng)改為will be held． 　　剖析：文章只寫(xiě)明了大部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤，但仍能達(dá)意，行文基本連貫．