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根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景和英文提示詞語,寫出語法正確,意思連貫,符合邏輯的英文文段.

所給的英文提示詞語必須都用上,中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐字翻譯.(字?jǐn)?shù)60~80)提示:假如你是李雷,現(xiàn)在你給你的英國朋友Jim寫一封信,告訴他你和同學(xué)們上周日去香山公園郊游的活動(dòng)的感受.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出.

你們?cè)缟掀唿c(diǎn)鐘在學(xué)校門口集合,大約八點(diǎn)鐘到達(dá)香山公園……

meet, arrive, at the foot of the hill, have a party, play games, climb, on the top of, see, how, beautiful, feel proud(自豪的), live Beijing, the 2008 Olympic Games, hold

  Dear Jim,

  Last Sunday my classmates and I want to Xiangshan Park, I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Lei

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  學(xué)生:習(xí)作:

  Dear Jim,

  Last Sunday my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park, we met at school gate at 7:00 in the morning. We arrived at the foot of the hill at about 8:00. We have a party(X1) and play games(X2) after we climbed the hill. On the top of the hill, I have a wonderful view(X3). How beautiful Beijing is! I felt proud because I live(X4) Beijing. And the 2008 Olympic games hold(X5) in Beijing.

  I hope we will meet in Beijing in 2008.

  Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Lei

  剖析:1.有了過去的時(shí)間狀語last Sunday動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí),所以havehad

  4live為不及物動(dòng)詞,不能跟賓語Beijing,因此要在live后加in

  5.此處為一般將來時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài),應(yīng)改為will be held

  剖析:文章只寫明了大部分要點(diǎn),語言有一些錯(cuò)誤,但仍能達(dá)意,行文基本連貫.


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