Question

書面表達 （滿分15分）

陽光中學學生Millie因?qū)W習壓力等一些心理問題，寫信向心理老師求助。

假如你是心理老師Sigmund Friend，請根據(jù)參考下表提示，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的回信。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不包含在詞數(shù)內(nèi)）。

喜歡的學科	英語 語文 歷史
問題	擔心數(shù)學考試而感到壓力	太胖不擅長運動；討厭跑步和做早操
建議	向數(shù)學老師求助；數(shù)學上多花些時間；穿黃色，智慧色…..	制定一個健康的食譜；堅持鍛煉，尤其是在體育課上……

Dear Millie,

You say you worry about the Maths test because

 

 

 

I hope my suggestions are worth taking.

Yours

Sigmund Friend

 

Answer 1

Possible version:

You say you like English, Chinese and History, but you worry about the Maths tests because you feel stressed at times. I think you can get help from the Maths teacher. You can also spend more time on maths. You can wear yellow clothes because it is the colour of wisdom. You can use some yellow stationery too.

You say you are getting too fat , so you aren’t good at sport. You also hate running and doing morning exercises. To solve this problem，I think you must have a healthy diet and exercise every day. Especially when you are having PE lessons So that you can lose weight and keep healthy. I hope my suggestions are worth taking.

I hope my suggestions are worth taking.

Yours

Sigmund Friend

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要是心理醫(yī)生對Millie求助信的回信，文中寫了他的問題和對于他的問題給出了相應的建議。 同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭結(jié)尾相呼應。開頭心理老師指出Millie的問題，并針對他的問題給予幫助 。I think you can get help from the Maths teacher.；You also hate running and doing morning exercises.這些短語和句子的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：話題作文。