Question

以“我最喜歡看的電視節(jié)目”為題寫一篇作文，字?jǐn)?shù)70---80。
提示：1、我最喜歡看的電視節(jié)目是”動(dòng)物世界”(The World of the Animals)。
2、通過看這節(jié)目，我能看到許多可愛的動(dòng)物以及其他一些正面臨的危險(xiǎn)，并領(lǐng)略世界各地的風(fēng)光。
3、但成千上萬的生物正在消失，包括各種動(dòng)物，并且解釋了這些動(dòng)物被殺死是因?yàn)槿藗円�得到它們的毛皮和骨頭。
4、我們應(yīng)保護(hù)動(dòng)物。
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

"Animal World" is a popular TV program by CCTV. It is also my favourite program. I like it because I really like small animals. Also, the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting. Finally, from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which I didn’t know before.
After I see this program, I know that many cute animals are in great danger, There are thousands of animals are disappearing, including all kinds of animals, people kill them for their furry and bone. I think we should protect the animals,only in this way can we protect our earth

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: . I like it because I really like small animals. Also,the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which Ididn't know before.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理. I think we should protect the animals ,Only in this way can we protect our earth 最后一句點(diǎn)名了文章的主旨我們要保護(hù)動(dòng)物。