Question

假如你Dave，請根據(jù)表格信息介紹自己，可適發(fā)揮。

要求：語句通順，語意連貫，語法正確。大約80詞左右。

Name	Dave	Age	13
Appearance（外貌）	中等個子，偏瘦，黑色短發(fā)
Hobbies（愛好）	聽音樂，打籃球 …
上周末活動	忙碌高興	周六上午做作業(yè)；下午和父母開車去奶奶家 ……
上周日上午和朋友打籃球；下午聽音樂……

My name is Dave. I’m 13.

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Answer 1

My name is Dave. I’m 13. I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.

Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目只給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容，故動筆前先要認真閱讀題目，確定寫作要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】范文運用一些常見短語：did my homework做家庭作業(yè) at home 在家listened to聽 did some reading做閱讀。Last weekend, I was busy but happy這外句子運用了but連接兩個并列的形容詞。And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading這個句子中and連接兩個并列的謂語動詞，時態(tài)保持一致。

考點： 提綱類作文。