Question

書面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

根據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。80詞左右。注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。

Inventions	When	Who	Be used for
camera	1839	a French painter	taking photos
bicycle	1880s	people in England	traveling
potato chips	1853	George Crum	eating
tea	Over three thousand years ago	the Chinese emperor, Shen Nong	drinking

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Answer 1

There are all kinds of inventions in our life. But do you know when these things were invented and who invented them? It is said that the camera was invented by a French painter in 1839. It was used for taking photos. The bicycle was invented by people in England. It was invented in the 1880s and was used for traveling. The potato chips were invented by George Crum in 1853. Of course, it was used for eating. Tea was invented over three thousand years ago. It was invented by the Chinese emperor, Shen Nong by accident. It was used for drinking. I think they are very useful.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以_Inventions_為題寫一篇作文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容，它包括：相機(jī)、自行車、土豆條、茶的發(fā)明時(shí)間、發(fā)明人以及用途等。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者按照題目要求，講述了幾種發(fā)明的時(shí)間等，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如But do you know when these things were invented and who invented them?等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如It is said that the camera was invented by a French painter in 1839.等。

考點(diǎn)：話題類作文。