Question

假設(shè)你和你的朋友上周日一起到萬綠園(Wanlv Garden)游玩, 請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，以 “A Happy Trip”為題，用英語寫一篇小短文在英語課上向同學(xué)匯報。

要求：短文須包括所給內(nèi)容， 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，70詞左右。

Weather	sunny
When	last Sunday
How to go	by bus
What to take	football, a camera, some kites, some water…
What to do	1. ride bikes 2. talk with each other 3… 4…
Feeling (感受)	…

A Happy Trip

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A Happy Trip

Last Sunday, my classmates and I had a happy trip to Wanlv Garden. It was sunny. In the morning, we met at the school gate and went there by bus. We got there at about nine o’clock. We took a basketball, a camera, some kites and some water there. After we got there, we rode bikes, flew kites and played football. After that, we had a rest and talked with each other happily. I took many photos for them. At about twelve o’clock, we had lunch near Wanlv Garden. We were all happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們記敘上周日和朋友去萬綠園游玩的事情，在表格中給出了我們具體的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容翻譯出來，并使表達(dá)流暢。通過審題可知，這篇短文描寫的是上周日的事情，故全文都應(yīng)該用一般過去時態(tài)，因此要注意每句話中的謂語動詞，都要用過去式的形式，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式，如get, take, have 等。寫作時要注意將表格中的所有要點都表達(dá)出來，不要有遺漏。關(guān)于對這次游玩的感受，我們需要用自己的話來補充。另外還需注意使用連詞和好的句型，使整篇文章流暢、完整。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。作者按照題目要求，將自己和同學(xué)去萬綠園游玩的事情完整的表達(dá)了出來，敘述很有條理，也很完整，包括了所有要點。尤其是注意了這篇作文應(yīng)該使用的時態(tài)，都是過去時，所以每句話中的謂語動詞都用過去式的形式。在這一點上，作者做得很好，沒有出現(xiàn)錯誤。文章中也用到了一些好的句式，如my classmates and I had a happy trip to Wanlv Garde、After we got there, we rode bikes, flew kites and played football、I took many photos for them.等。

考點：提綱類作文。