Question

書面表達(dá)。（10分）

以My hobby為題介紹一下自己的愛好，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。

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Answer 1

Everyone has their own hobbies, my hobby is bird watching! I am very fond of birds, a variety of birds. I have a telescope, with its clear to see that a variety of birds, I would like to learn about birds of knowledge, and buying books about birds, so that will be able to more detailed understanding of birds, because the world's many different types of birds, just to do these are not enough, I would like to continue their efforts to learn more about birds, so a successful bird-watching enthusiasts!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如I would like to learn about birds of knowledge, and buying books about birds, so that will be able to more detailed understanding of birds,等，so that等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。