Question

請(qǐng)你結(jié)合上題的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇題為 “How to be a Popular Student” 的英語(yǔ)短文，在學(xué)校英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站上發(fā)表。

注意：詞數(shù)80-100左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

How to be a Popular Student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.

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Answer 1

How to be a Popular Student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. To become popular, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family. While taking part in all our class activities, we should work as a team.

To be a popular student, we should be kind to others and we are ready to lend a hand to those in need.

Also we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, volunteer work and so on.

I hope each of us will become a popular student.

【解析】

試題分析：小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的文章的內(nèi)容怎樣成為受歡迎的人。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如To be a popular student, we should be kind to others and we are ready to lend a hand to those in need. Also we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, volunteer work and so on. 等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：考查話題類作文。