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中國(guó)著名作家莫言，真名管謨業(yè)，2012年10月獲得諾貝爾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)（The Noble Prize in Literature)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)他的介紹。

1955年7月	出生于山東濰坊, 農(nóng)民的兒子
1981年	開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作，小說(shuō)家和短篇故事家
1988年	張藝謀導(dǎo)演的電影《紅高粱》，由他的小說(shuō)改篇
2011年	作品《蛙》獲得茅盾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)
2012年10月	成為第一個(gè)獲諾貝爾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)的中國(guó)人，居住地成了旅游景點(diǎn)。
你的感想（請(qǐng)考生自擬1-2點(diǎn)）

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；     
2.短文應(yīng)把表格中所示內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；
3.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，請(qǐng)考生在文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名；
4.參考詞匯：novelist小說(shuō)家；Red Sorghum«紅高粱»；The Frog«蛙»；The Mao Dun Prize in Literature茅盾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)
The Chinese writer Mo Yan was famous for getting the 2012 Nobel Prize in Literature. His true name is Guan Moye.
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Answer 1

Possible version:
The Chinese writer Mo Yan was famous for getting the 2012 Nobel Prize in Literature. His true name is Guan Moye.
He was born in Wei Fang of Shandong in July, 1955. He is the son of a farmer. In 1981, he began to write. He is not only a novelist but also a writer of short stories. One of his novels was made into the film Red Sorghum directed by Zhang Yimou in 1988.
His work The Frog won the Mao Dun Literature Prize in 2011. What’s more, in October, 2012, he became the first Chinese to win the Nobel Prize. Also because of this his hometown has become/becomes the tourist attraction.
I’m proud of him. And I’ll try my best to work hard to learn from him. (自擬部分學(xué)生言之成理即可) (107詞)

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細(xì)，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意在介紹莫言的出生及過(guò)去成就時(shí)，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第三人稱。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。