Question

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)上一小題的提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Michael寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你們的校園活動(dòng)，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你對(duì)校園活動(dòng)的看法。
注意：
（1）內(nèi)容應(yīng)至少包含兩項(xiàng)校園活動(dòng)，要求意思、語(yǔ)句連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（3）注意書(shū)信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

June 13th, 2011

Answer 1

Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colourful school life.
We usually have our activities from 4:30 to 6:00 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some of us are interested in sports. They play football and basketball. Every term there is a basketball match between students and teachers in our school. We also have some clubs, such as drawing club, dancing club and singing club. But computer is the most popular in our school now. We have a computer room in our school. There’re more than 100 computers in it. Every afternoon, some students go and play computer games. On Thursday afternoon we go to English corner. We like talking in English there. We like English corner very much. Because we practice lots of oral English there.
We hope we can spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.
Yours
Li Ming
June 13th, 2011

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱(chēng)的變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。