Question

假如你是李華，請根據(jù)上一小題的提示，給你的英國筆友Michael寫一封信，介紹你們的校園活動，并說說你對校園活動的看法。
注意：
（1）內(nèi)容應至少包含兩項校園活動，要求意思、語句連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)80—100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（3）注意書信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。

June 13th, 2011

Answer 1

Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colourful school life.
We usually have our activities from 4:30 to 6:00 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some of us are interested in sports. They play football and basketball. Every term there is a basketball match between students and teachers in our school. We also have some clubs, such as drawing club, dancing club and singing club. But computer is the most popular in our school now. We have a computer room in our school. There’re more than 100 computers in it. Every afternoon, some students go and play computer games. On Thursday afternoon we go to English corner. We like talking in English there. We like English corner very much. Because we practice lots of oral English there.
We hope we can spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.
Yours
Li Ming
June 13th, 2011

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應該注意人稱的變化。
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。