Question

書面表達(dá)
假設(shè)你是珍妮，中考后你將參加赴英國(guó)的“名校之行”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格提供的信息準(zhǔn)備一篇在開(kāi)營(yíng)儀式的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。
注意：1.、詞數(shù)：60-80左右。2、發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Name	Age	Free time activities	Future job	Hope	Favorite subject
Jenny	15	draw pictures of animals enjoy the singing of birds in nature listen to music read English books…	teacher	make good friends …	English

Dear Friend,
I’m very happy to be in this Summer Camp to know about the famous universities in London.I’m glad to introuduce myself to you.                                         
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
That’s all.Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Dear Friend,
I’m very happy to be in this Summer Camp to know about the famous universities in London.I’m glad to introuduce myself to you. My name is jenny. I’m fifteen years old. I live in Guangzhou. One of my favorite subjects is English. I’m also interested in drawing. In my free time, i often draw some pictures of animals, listen to music and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. I also like reading English books. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good firends.
That’s all.Thank you for listening.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己的發(fā)言稿文。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。