Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，以My friend 為題寫一篇短文。

Name	Jenny
Personality	誠(chéng)實(shí)，有幽默感，保守秘密。喜歡幫助需要幫助的人。
School life	在一所混合學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)許多不同的學(xué)科，學(xué)校每年有閱讀周。
Future plan	打算旅游 ( 交通方式，時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，計(jì)劃哪些活動(dòng))

 

具體要求：

1. 不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

My friend

I have a good friend called Jenny. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

My Friend

I have a good friend. Called Jenny.She is honest and she has a sense of humor.She often keeps a

secret.She likes to help other people who needs help. She studies in a mixed school, and she learns many different subjects.The school has a reading week every year.She has a travelling plan.She wants to go there by train this weekend. In the morning, she is going to the Great Wall. It's one of the greatest wonders in the world. At noon, she will go to the Summer Palace. There are so many interesting sites, such as Wanshou Mountain, Kunming Lake, Suzhou Street, and some other ancient palaces. Next, she can go

boating on Kunming Lake.In the afternoon, she will go to have a long walk on Tiananman Square, in order to see the city well, and then she can visit the Palace Museum. There she can see different objects

of different periods.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照題目結(jié)合表格完成這篇作文，我們要用簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確的句子把表格中的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作中要包含性格，學(xué)校生活，旅游計(jì)劃等內(nèi)容；要注意表達(dá)清楚，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮描述一下她的旅游計(jì)劃內(nèi)容。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了自己的好友Jenny的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短語(yǔ)都很準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，.如: She likes to help other people who needs help.文中還恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧艘恍┕潭ň涫郊岸陶Z(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：表格作文。