Question

請以“My community centre”為題，介紹你家所在的社區(qū)的一些情況。要點(diǎn)提示：
1.我住在人民路城市花園小區(qū)。小區(qū)周圍有超市、飯館、一所學(xué)校和一所醫(yī)院等。2.這里的鄰居很友好和樂于助人。其中一些是志愿者，他們經(jīng)常在社區(qū)中心集中并分享各種不同的技能，他們能幫助人們解決各種問題。3.在周末，他們會召開援助會議，然后幫助人們檢查電腦、修理自行車。有時也去看望老年人，幫助他們打掃房間或購物。4.談?wù)勀銓ψ≡谶@個社區(qū)中心的感想。
                                                                          
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version:
I live in a neighbourhood in City Garden in Remain Road. Around it there are supermarkets, restaurants, a school and a hospital. The neighbours here are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often meet at the community center and share their different skills. They can help people with all kinds of problems. At the weekend they usually have a “helping hands” meeting. Then they help people check their computers or fix their bicycles. Sometimes they also visit old people and help them do some shopping or clean their flats. I think we’re lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.

試題分析：寫作要抓住要點(diǎn)。初一的作文著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面。在平時的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文的寫作首先社區(qū)中心的人們的一些活動進(jìn)行描寫。然后，用簡潔的語言來表達(dá)義工們有時去看望老人（visit the old），幫助他們打掃房間(clean the rooms)或是購物(go shopping)，有時陪老人們聊天(chat with them)等活動。最后，表達(dá)自己對社區(qū)中心的評價或感想。I think we’re lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.