Question

書面表達，假如你是David，今年暑假，你去北京游玩了．請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息，給你在美國的網(wǎng)友Frank寫一封郵件，介紹一下此次游玩的情況．要求：語句通順，意思連貫，中心突出：80詞壽右．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總數(shù)．

時間	今年暑假
地點	北京
參加者	你和父母親
天氣	晴，熱
活動
感受

Dear Frank,

How was your vacation ? Please write back to me soon．

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Yours,

David

 

Answer 1

Sunday, May Day

It was sunny, but a little windy. I went to visit some famous places in Beijing with my parents. We went to the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and Tiantan. We had a great time.

We had meat, fish, vegetables and fruit for dinner. The food was delicious. We were tired but happy when we got to the hotel in the evening.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較簡略，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: It was sunny, but a little windy. 天氣晴朗，但有點風。I We were tired but happy when we got to the hotel in the evening. 在晚上我們到了酒店時，我們很累但很高興。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：提綱作文。