Question

根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖所給的提示信息， 以My Favorite Day為題，介紹自己在星期六一天的活動(dòng)。要求如下：
按照箭頭所示進(jìn)行要點(diǎn)表達(dá)。2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。3. 詞數(shù)50—60個(gè)詞。
                       
My Favorite Day
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Answer 1

My  favorite Day
I am Betty. My favorite day of the week is Saturday. I get up at nine o’clock on Saturday and I don’t  do any homework. I don’t eat lunch at school. I have lunch at home with my father and mother. I go to see her friends in the evening.I am happy on Saturday.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己最喜歡的一天，以及喜歡的理由。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I don’t……，I get up.....及I am.......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了自己最喜歡星期六，接下來(lái)介紹在星期六不干什么，最后指出在星期六干什么。此處用了get up ，do any homework.，at school.  go to see her friends等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。