Question

請你根據個人信息檔案,寫一篇英語短文介紹你剛剛認識的新同學張華。

Name	Zhang Hua
Age	12
Birthplace	Zhenjiang
Be like	not very tall; have black, long hair; big eyes
School	No. 4 Middle School
Class	Class 3, Grade 7
Be good at	Math and English
Hobbies	swimming
After-school activities	play tennis, reading

要求： 1. 詞數不少于60詞，開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數；
2. 內容必須包括上表所有要點，可以適當發(fā)揮；
3. 條理清楚，語意連貫，書寫整潔。
Hello, everyone! This is my new classmate Zhang Hua.                            
                                                                             
                                                                           
                                                                             

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! This is my new classmate Zhang Hua. He’s 12 years old. He was born in Zhenjiang but he lives in Jurong with his parents.
He’s not very tall. He has black, long hair and he has big eyes. He studies at No.4 Middle School. He is in Class 3, Grade7. He’s good at Maths and English. He likes swimming and he’s in the Swimming Club. There are many after-school activities every day. He often plays tennis with us. Sometimes he does some reading in the school library.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。作文要求介紹一個新同學，并且列出了該同學的詳細信息，如姓名、年齡、出生地等。在寫作中，我們要把給出的這些材料組成句子。文章課采用第三人稱，用一般現在時。在寫作時，注意不要漏掉相關信息，可適當發(fā)揮。尤其注意主謂一致。
【亮點說明】
這篇文章充分利用所給信息，并適當加入一些句子使內容不再是簡單的堆砌，而顯得很有條理。如There are many after-school activities every day每天有很多課外活動。這句話很自然得引出了下面的內容；另外加入了一些表頻率的詞如often，sometimes,使文章更緊湊，順暢。