Question

書面表達(dá)
古城揚(yáng)州吸引了越來越多的國內(nèi)外游客，假設(shè)你是小明，今天你帶領(lǐng)北京老師們進(jìn)行了揚(yáng)州一日游。請根據(jù)下列表格內(nèi)容，以“A day trip to Yangzhou”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

時(shí)間	地   點(diǎn)	活   動
上午	瘦西湖   the Slender West Lake	欣賞美景、劃船、拍照；玩得很開心
中午	富春茶社 Fuchun Tea House	品嘗當(dāng)?shù)貍鹘y(tǒng)食品；最喜歡小吃(snack)
下午	大明寺Daming Temple	了解歷史
晚上	雙東街區(qū)the Traditional Double-dong Blocks	購物，為朋友買紀(jì)念品；
感受	至少兩點(diǎn)

 

Answer 1

day trip to Yangzhou
Today, I showed the teachers from Beijing around our city Yangzhou. Yangzhou is a beautiful city with a long history. The weather here is quite different from that in Beijing. And it’s warm and comfortable all year round.
In the morning, we went to the Slender West Lake. We enjoyed beautiful view, went boating, took photos and all of us had a good time. At noon, We came to Fuchun Tea House, we tasted local traditional food and had our favorite snacks. In the afternoon, we went to Daming Temple to learn the history of Yangzhou. At night, we went shopping in the Traditional Double-dong Blocks. The teachers from Beijing bought a lot of souvenirs for their friends.
After a day’s trip, I felt very tired but I felt very happy. Because I introduced our city to the friends from Beijing. They like Yangzhou very much and think it’s a good place to live in. I am very happy to hear that.

試題分析：本文的寫作極具介紹地方相關(guān)作文的寫作典型。首先，對揚(yáng)州的總體情況進(jìn)行說明，如歷史悠久，天氣情況等with a long history. The weather here is quite different from that in Beijing.然后，對上午，中午，下午和晚上分別所做的事情進(jìn)行陳述，寫作過程中可以按照時(shí)間順序進(jìn)行描寫。最后表達(dá)自己的感受，首先可以說自己累但是同時(shí)也很快樂I felt very tired but I felt very happy，其次可以從我為北京的朋友介紹了揚(yáng)州，他們非常喜歡我自己也感到很高興來進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的表達(dá)I am very happy to hear that.
點(diǎn)評：在對于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生要注意變換句式，可以多使用高級詞匯和多變換句式。學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對于不會表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采。