Question

以“My friend”為題向你的同學(xué)介紹你最好的朋友，要點如下：

1. 就讀于陽光中學(xué)8年級

2. 不僅是我的鄰居，也是我最好的朋友 ；

3. 留著黑色的長直發(fā)，長著一張圓臉，總是面帶微笑 ，很有幽默感，愛講笑話

4. 樂于助人，經(jīng)常在公車上給人讓座

5. 喜歡讀書， 經(jīng)常從圖書館借書，并在課后和我討論看過的書

4. 理想是當(dāng)一名社會工作者，認(rèn)真傾聽并幫助人們解決困難。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I have a friend. Her name is Millie. She is not only my neighbor but also my best friend. She studies in Sunshine Middle School. She has long black hair and a round face. She is humorous and she likes to tell jokes. There’s always a simile on her face，too. She is such a helpful girl that she often give her seat to others on the bus. She likes reading books and she often borrows books from the library. We often talk about the books that she had read. When she grows up，she wants to be a social worker，listen to the people and help them with their difficulties.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將所提示內(nèi)容的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；such……that……如此……以至于……；not only……but also……不但……而且……；talk about談?wù)�；grow up長大等。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：考查提綱類作文