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書(shū)面表達(dá)

2008年5月12日，四川汶川發(fā)生了特大地震，數(shù)十萬(wàn)人傷亡，數(shù)百萬(wàn)人失去了家園，數(shù)萬(wàn)孩子失去了校園。在此危難之時(shí)，全國(guó)人民眾志成城，抗震救災(zāi)，向?yàn)?zāi)區(qū)人民伸出了援助之手。假設(shè)你叫李偉(Li Wei)，請(qǐng)你從學(xué)生的角度，以A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan為題，給災(zāi)區(qū)的孩子寫(xiě)一封英文短信，以表達(dá)你的同情、關(guān)心、支持與鼓勵(lì)，讓他們盡快從地震的陰霾中走出來(lái)。

要點(diǎn)提示：同情　關(guān)心　支持　鼓勵(lì)　祝愿

提示性詞語(yǔ)：earthquake, kill, wound(致傷), relatives, destroy, lonely, homeland, loveliest, whole-heartedly(全心全意地)，donate, overcome(克服), confidence, firm will(堅(jiān)定的意志)，rebuild(重建), pocket money(零花錢(qián))

注意：(1)請(qǐng)盡可能使用所給的提示性詞語(yǔ)，但寫(xiě)作不受所給詞語(yǔ)的順序限制．

(2)句式工整，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，語(yǔ)句條理性強(qiáng)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右。

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One possible version： A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan Dear little friends, 　　May12,2008 was the most terrible day for you, for me and for all the Chinese．The great earthquake killed and wounded your relatives, your teachers and your classmates, and destroyed your houses and schools badly．You felt very sad and our hearts were also broken deeply．However, you are not lonely．The loveliest people, such as the leaders, soldiers, doctors and volunteers, immediately arrived and helped you whole-heartedly．The people all over China are donating money, things or even their blood．I’ve also donated all my pocket money． 　　All these days I’ve been collecting the information from Wenchuan．Sometimes tears on my face while watching, listening or reading． 　　China is a big family．We are all your brothers and sisters．We will do everything to help you rebuild your homeland and make you be out of the endless pains．We are all together with you for ever．I believe you can overcome the difficulties with your confidence and the firm will．Please accept my heartfelt wishes：You’ll be fine in the future． 　　Best wishes to you all! Yours, Li Wei 　　一、評(píng)分原則 　　1．本題總分為10分，按四個(gè)檔次給分，至少包含以下要點(diǎn)：同情、關(guān)心、支持、鼓勵(lì)與祝愿。 　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 　　3．文中若出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名，酌情扣分。 　　4．未按書(shū)信格式寫(xiě)作的，扣1分。 　　二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 　　三、說(shuō)明 　　1．所給提示性詞語(yǔ)不受范圍及順序的限制。 　　2．對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。相同的錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)算。