Question

美國男孩Eric來信想在北京征詢筆友。假如你是Liu Xing，你想和Eric成為筆友。請根據(jù)下面表格中所提供的信息，用英語給Eric寫一封回信，介紹你自己的情況。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，字?jǐn)?shù)不計在內(nèi)。要求：字跡工整清楚，60字左右。

Name: Liu Xing Age:13

Live in: Beijing Date of birth :November 19th, 1999

A sports collection: 3 soccer balls 5 basketballs 6 volleyballs

Favorite food: fruit/healthy

Hobbies: play basketball / listen to music

Favorite subject : science / difficult but interesting

Dear Eric,

Thanks for your letter. I know you want a pen pal in Beijing. I want to __________

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Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Liu Xing

 

Answer 1

Dear Eric,

Thanks for your letter. I know you want a pen pal in Beijing. I want to make friends with you. My name is Liu Xing. I’m a 13-year-old boy. I live in Beijing. My birthday is on November 19th.I love sports. I have a big sports collection. I have 3 soccer balls, 5 basketballs and 6 volleyballs. And I often play sports with my friends after school.

I also like playing basketball and listening to music. Do you know what my favorite subject is ? science. I think it’s difficult but interesting. What about you？

Please writer to me soon.

Yours,

Liu Xing

【解析】

試題分析：

本文是書信，給出一定的漢語提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個整體。最后要注意使用高級詞匯與高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因為是書信，故時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時較好，注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換并且注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換

【亮點說明】本文出現(xiàn)一些比較常見的短語make friends with與某人做朋友 after school課下 listen to 聽 like doing喜歡做某事。I also like playing basketball and listening to music這個句子中and連接兩個并且的動名詞形式 。Do you know what my favorite subject is這個句子考查動詞的賓語從句，由特殊疑問詞引導(dǎo)用正常語序。I think it’s difficult but interesting這個句子中用it做形式主語。本文出現(xiàn)比較高級詞匯如favorite difficult interesting為文章增色不少。

考點：提綱類作文。