Question

請你設(shè)計(jì)一下你心目中的理想學(xué)校，以便校長對以后的學(xué)校改建或重建作參考。

Answer 1

My Ideal School
This is my ideal school. My classroom building is in the middle of the school. The teachers’ offices are on the fourth floor. The dining hall is behind the classroom building. The gym is very large. It is next to the dining hall. In the gym, there is a swimming pool. The science lab is in front of the gym. The library is on the left of the science lab. There are many books in it.

解析試題分析；這是一篇命題作文，介紹你心目中的理想學(xué)校。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意運(yùn)用所給短語。敘述順序基本按照時(shí)間順序敘述即可，注意上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當(dāng)使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語法錯(cuò)誤。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文
點(diǎn)評：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意對于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進(jìn)行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對于敘述的邏輯問題有很大的幫助。