Question

根據(jù)下表所列內(nèi)容，寫一篇文章介紹你的筆友張平，并根據(jù)他的困惑給他提一些建議。要點表達要全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字數(shù)100字左右。

	出生日期	2000年8月23日
基本	星座	Virgo
情況	個性	謙虛，友善，富有創(chuàng)造力。
愛好	酷愛足球，熱愛大自然，加入Birdwatching Club兩年了
	學(xué)習(xí)	作業(yè)多，想考高分，壓力大。
困惑	情感	父母整天忙于工作，不時感到孤獨。
	穿白色衣服，因為……
建議	使用黃色文具復(fù)習(xí)迎考，因為……
多與家人朋友……

Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He_______________________________________________

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Answer 1

Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He was born on August 23, 1997. He is a Virgo. Zhang Ping is a modest person. He’s practical and pays attention to details. He has many hobbies. He is crazy about playing football. He also loves nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years. However, as a Grade 9 student, he has some problems. He has too much homework to do. He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams. What’s more, his parents are busy working all day and have no time for him, so he feels lonely from time to time.

I want to offer Zhang Ping some advice. When he feels stressed , he should wear white, because white can make him feel calm and peaceful. When he study for exams, he can use yellow stationery, because yellow is the colour of wisdom. When he feels lonely, he can have communication with his family or friends and share his worries with them. I hope my advice will be of great value to him.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如He’s practical and pays attention to details He also loves nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years.等，When, What’s more等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。