Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿(mǎn)分15分）

在你成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中， 你認(rèn)識(shí)了許許多多的人。請(qǐng)以“A person I will never forget”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求如下：

1. 短文內(nèi)容必須包括：General appearance(外貌)

Hobby

Personality(性格)

The reasons that you will never forget him/her

2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出(開(kāi)頭的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

A person I will never forget

The person I’ll never forget is

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A person I will never forget

The person I’ll never forget is my English teacher. He is a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.

He is humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.

I was not good at English at the beginning. He often helps me and is patient enough to explain the difficulties to me. With his help, my English has been greatly improved.

My English teacher is the best teacher that I have ever met. I will never forget him.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用所給要求來(lái)完成文章，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其要謝謝胡所要求的內(nèi)容。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾相呼應(yīng)。開(kāi)頭指出我永遠(yuǎn)忘不了的那個(gè)人是英語(yǔ)老師，接下來(lái)寫(xiě)他的外貌，愛(ài)好，性格以及忘不了他的原因。此處用了賓語(yǔ)從句pretend that we know what we don’t know. 和主語(yǔ)從句it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.以及is strict with us. allows us to pretend這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。最后在說(shuō) 永遠(yuǎn)忘不了他的原因與文章開(kāi)頭相呼應(yīng)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。