Question

假設(shè)你家采取了如下表所示的環(huán)保措施，請(qǐng)以“The environmental protection at home”為題寫一篇關(guān)于你們是如何在家進(jìn)行環(huán)保的短文。100詞左右。

The things you do or use	The thing you don’t do or use
use solar water heater（太陽(yáng)能熱水器）	electric water heater (電熱水器)
use CFLs（節(jié)能燈）	light bulbs（電燈泡）
collect paper and bottles and sell them	throw away paper or bottles
use cloth bags for shopping	plastic bags

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

The environmental protection at home

Pollution has been a serious problem for a certain time around the world. There are many causes for it. Transportation is the main factor of pollution. When the waste gas from cars is released, the air is polluted. People breathing in the polluted air can develop respiratory disease. Another factor is that people throw their garbage everywhere. All kinds of garbage not only spoil the splendid environment, but also cause environmental pollution. What's more, industrial pollution also deserves our attention. Wastewater from factories is poured into rivers and this causes water pollution. As a consequence, the greenhouse effect becomes a problem which needs our immediate caution and how to solve is urgent all over the world. At present, some measures have been taken to prevernt. For example, people classify the garbage and some is recycled after being collected. People are also encouraged to use paper products instead of plastic products because we know that our living condition will be worse if we keep ignoring this problem. And I believe we can prevent pollution if everyone makes the efforts.

【解析】

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

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