Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分10分）

假設(shè)你是Millie，根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一封給網(wǎng)友Jane的信。

1. 北京是一個(gè)繁華的城市，有許多名勝古跡。

2. 有許多博物館、公園和購物中心。這些使北京的生活更舒適和豐富多彩。

3. 上個(gè)月邀請(qǐng)了叔叔Tom游覽北京。他為人慷慨，有幽默感。

4. 當(dāng)他到達(dá)時(shí)，不能相信自己的眼睛。他說建筑變得更高了。他決定盡快把這些告訴他的朋友們。

注意：1)正確地書寫格式和使用時(shí)態(tài)。 2)短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)。

3)詞數(shù)80左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使句子通順、連貫。

Dear Jane,

 

 

 

 

Yours

Millie

 

Answer 1

Dear Jane,

Beijing is a busy city with many places of interest. There are many museums, parks and shopping centers. All these make life in Beijing more comfortable and colorful.

Last month, I invited Uncle Tom to visit Beijing. He is generous and has a good sense of humour. When he arrived here, he couldn’t believe his eyes. He said the buildings became taller and taller. He decided to tell his friends about these as soon as possible.

I hope you can come and enjoy yourself here too.

Yours,

Millie

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要是向筆友介紹北京的情況，并通過邀請(qǐng)叔叔來北京介紹了北京的變化情況注意要用到一般過去式。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 開頭指出北京有很多名勝古跡，之后介紹了邀請(qǐng)叔叔來北京參觀通過叔叔的感受可知北京的變化，最后向筆友提出邀請(qǐng)。Beijing is a busy city with many places of interest.；I invited Uncle Tom to visit Beijing；He decided to tell his friends about these as soon as possible.這些短語和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。