Question

書面表達(dá) （本大題共10分）

假如你叫Billy，是無錫市某初級中學(xué)的一名九年級學(xué)生，學(xué)校將組織由學(xué)生推選“十佳教師”的評選活動。你準(zhǔn)備寫一封推薦信給校長Mr Smith，推薦你的英語老師Mrs Lin當(dāng)選，請你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一封電子郵件給Mr Smith。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.四十幾歲，教英語已有十幾年；

2.耐心，為我們重復(fù)語法規(guī)則；

3.嚴(yán)格，要求我們盡可能經(jīng)常復(fù)習(xí)所學(xué)內(nèi)容；

4.善良并充滿愛心，……

5.令我們驚訝的是……

注意：

1. 推薦信須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第4、5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2～3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，推薦信的開頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers.

 

 

 

 

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers. She’s in her forties and has taught English for over ten years. She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us. She is strict with us. She requires us to go over what we’ve learnt as often as possible. She’s also kind and has a heart full of love. She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble. To our surprise, she donates her money to three poor students in a village in the west of China every year.

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

這篇短文主要是作者寫了一封電子郵件向Mr Smith校長推薦自己心目中的“十佳教師”。文章中使用了大量的固定句式和短語，使文章增色不少.如: She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us；She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble.牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。