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你以前的小學(xué)同學(xué)賈斯汀(Justin)和他的父母一起搬到了城里,并在那里學(xué)習(xí)生活,那里學(xué)習(xí)很緊張,整天很忙。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn),以“My good friend ---Justin”為題,寫一篇介紹Justin學(xué)習(xí)和生活的一篇文章,可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展,字?jǐn)?shù)70字左右,開頭不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

姓名

Justin在新東方學(xué)校(New Oriental school)讀七年級(jí)

年齡

13歲 和爸爸媽媽住在一所公寓里

學(xué)校

學(xué)校大、漂亮、很近,步行上學(xué),學(xué)校老師和同學(xué)友好熱心。

愛好

游泳;籃球 擅長繪畫、數(shù)學(xué);很少看電視

個(gè)性

和善,樂于助人 常常在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助他人

 

 

 

 

 

 

My good friend ---Justin

Justin is my good friend. He is 13years old now. He lives with his parents in a apartment building near the school. He’s in Grade 7 of New Oriental school. This school is big and beautiful. Justin lives nears the school, so he walks to school every day. His teachers and classmates are all friendly and helpful. He likes swimming, playing basketball math and he is good at drawing. He is friendly to everyone and we all like him.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,介紹自己的朋友。本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)展開寫作。根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要用第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.寫作中注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配問題。注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用的句式短語較為簡單. 主要是主謂結(jié)構(gòu)。但是通過一些這些簡單句式的靈活搭配,使得文章避免單純的重復(fù),使得短文既通俗易懂又邏輯清楚。讓我們對(duì)作者的朋友西門有了一個(gè)比較全面的了解,不失為一篇上等作文。

考點(diǎn):考查提綱類作文

 

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