Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題有1小題；滿分10分）

根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇約70字左右的短文。文章首句和末句已給出。

要求:書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，大小寫(xiě)正確。

	Name	Chen Jie
From	China
Age	13
School	Class 4, Grade 1, Jinsha No.2 Middle School
Favourite sports	Swimming, basketball
Things can do	Play the piano
Father’s job	A teacher ( No.1 Middle School)
Mother’s job	A manager ( a hotel )

Hello ,I am a nice girl!_____________________________________________

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Let’s be friends.

 

Answer 1

My name is Chen Jie. I’m from china and I’m Chinese. I’m 13 years old. I’m in Class 4, Grade 1 in Jinsha No. 2 Middle School. I like swimming and playing basketball. I can play tennis but I can’t play table tennis. There are three people in my family. They are my father, mother and me. My father is a teacher in No.1 Middle School. My mother is a manager in a hotel. I love them.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓我們介紹陳杰的個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介情況和她的爸爸媽媽的情況。小作者把要求寫(xiě)的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫(xiě)了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如I like swimming and playing basketball. I can play tennis but I can’t play table tennis.用上了些連詞。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。