Question

請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿。

背景	1.認(rèn)為上中學(xué)時(shí)吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的 2.走向社會后沒有感恩意識 3. 行為方式令人擔(dān)憂
學(xué)會感恩	1.感謝社會提供良好的教育機(jī)會 2.感謝父母...... 3.感謝老師...... 4.......

小詞典：enter society進(jìn)入社會sense of thanks感恩意識
要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2．詞數(shù)：90詞左右。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．演講稿中不得提及所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Good morning, boys and girls!  The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”…
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.
I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. Because of society, we can have a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.
In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our country more beautiful.
Thank you for your listening!

解析試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，短文已經(jīng)給出開頭和結(jié)尾.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉
考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫作
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。