Question

請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇描述中國(guó)春節(jié)的文章。（不少于60詞）
                                                                                            
                                                                                              
                                                                                                 

Answer 1

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’s to celebrate the lunar calendar ‘s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .
The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”. People enjoy the Spring Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文,要求寫(xiě)一篇自己最喜愛(ài)的節(jié)日的短文。故動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)確定材料，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這起事件的看法。結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短語(yǔ)。如set off出發(fā)；have a rest休息等.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.