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今年我省出臺(tái)了系列推進(jìn)素質(zhì)教育的新政，其中對(duì)學(xué)生的作息時(shí)間做了嚴(yán)格規(guī)定。學(xué)生課外時(shí)間增多了，他們都在干些什么？他們的負(fù)擔(dān)減輕了嗎？下面是English Online雜志社就這些問題對(duì)某市部分初中生進(jìn)行問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果。請(qǐng)根據(jù)該調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一份80～100詞的調(diào)查報(bào)告，并簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀愕囊庖姾涂捶�。文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

　　English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time．Here is the result．

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One possible version： 　　English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time．Here is the result． 　　After school, 60％ of them study and read books or do homework at home．5％ watch TV and 15％ play computer games．20％ do sports or play outdoors with classmates or friends． 　　Things are much better than before, but still about 60％ of students are busy at studying in their free time．Study is not the only important thing for children．Playing is important for them, too．By playing, children can keep healthy, and can learn things that they can’t get from books．So children need more time to do different kinds of activities． 　　評(píng)分說明： 　　要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整準(zhǔn)確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容，書寫工整。分四檔評(píng)分： 　　1、短文通順完整，表達(dá)清楚，語言基本無誤，17－20分； 　　2、短文較通順完整，表達(dá)基本清楚，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，12－16分； 　　3、能寫明基本要點(diǎn)，短文不夠通順完整，語言有較多錯(cuò)誤，但尚能達(dá)意，6－11分； 　　4、僅能寫明部分要點(diǎn)，短文不完整，語言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)，0－5分。