Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所要完成的回信內(nèi)。所給提供的英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李明，你的筆友David要來(lái)北京旅行。他給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，想了解北京的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件。
提示詞語(yǔ): the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, amazing, fantastic, crowed

Answer 1

One possible version:
Hi! David,
I’m glad to hear from you. The best time to come to Beijing is during the Spring. The weather is not too hot or too cold, so it is the perfect time of the year to be outside. During the Spring in Beijing everything seems fresh and new.
I advise you to visit the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, and the Temple of Heaven. The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place to visit. The Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are beautiful too. There are royal buildings, fantastic artwork, and scenic views for people to enjoy.
Before you come to Beijing, you should know that Beijing is a very crowded and big city. So it is necessary for you to travel with a map and you must be patient about waiting in line or large crows.
I hope you will have a nice trip.
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，戴維德在來(lái)信中提出了幾個(gè)問(wèn)題，所以我們?cè)诨匦胖袑?duì)來(lái)信內(nèi)容都要有所回應(yīng)。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:hear from收到……的來(lái)信等。多種句式的使用是本文看起來(lái)既條理清楚，又語(yǔ)意連貫。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。