Question

7．以My_______為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文．
要求：
1．補(bǔ)全題目．
2．書寫整潔，語(yǔ)句、標(biāo)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用、單詞拼寫正確．
3．若寫人物文中不得出現(xiàn)真名．
Myfavoritesports
As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old當(dāng)我只有五歲的時(shí)候我學(xué)會(huì)了游泳．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks雖然一開(kāi)始在水里我有點(diǎn)緊張，但在我的父母和教練的幫助下，幾個(gè)星期之后我能游的很好．
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．不能與but連用．

解答 My favorite sports
As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．（介紹你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)．）It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．【高分句型一】Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks【高分句型二】．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．（如何進(jìn)行體育運(yùn)動(dòng)）
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment．（運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在動(dòng)筆寫作選取材料時(shí)，要注意選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容．在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性