Question

作文 (20分)

請(qǐng)你以 My friend 為題，根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇作文：

1. Kate，一個(gè)13歲女孩，是來(lái)自于七年級(jí)（3）班的一名學(xué)生；她的教室又大又亮，班上有60個(gè)學(xué)生；

2. 戴著眼鏡，小眼睛，留著一頭黑色長(zhǎng)發(fā)；

3. 待人有好，愛(ài)好畫畫；

4. 學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，每天早上6點(diǎn)起床，晚上8點(diǎn)半睡覺(jué)；

5. 經(jīng)常運(yùn)動(dòng)，想保持健康；

6. 她喜歡打乒乓球;在周末她喜歡聽音樂(lè)。

要求：1. 語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)拓展,不要逐句翻譯。

2.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。

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Answer 1

My best friend

My best friend is Daniel. He is 13 years old. He studies in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is short and wears glasses. He is wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans today. He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle. He often exercises and he seldom has hamburgers and coke. He thinks they are bad for his health. He is interested in drawing. And he likes playing computer games too. As a student, he is busy with his study. So he doesn’t have much time to play computer games. There is a shopping mall near his home. He often goes shopping there. And he thinks it’s a good place to buy things.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容完成這篇介紹好朋友的作文。寫作中要包含介紹朋友的幾個(gè)方面：姓名、年齡、就讀學(xué)校班級(jí)和外貌、性格及愛(ài)好，今天的穿著等進(jìn)行陳述，表達(dá)出朋友的與眾不同的特點(diǎn)等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文全面、詳盡地闡明了朋友的各項(xiàng)基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部?jī)?nèi)容。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含形容詞的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle.，are bad for，play computer games，go shopping，文中對(duì)于名詞的使用準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，如wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans，have much time學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)、牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。