Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）

現(xiàn)在，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生加入到了志愿者的行列中。他們?nèi)プ咴L老人，探望病號(hào)，幫助輔導(dǎo)小學(xué)生的功課……請(qǐng)你描述一下這一現(xiàn)象，并發(fā)表自己對(duì)志愿者工作的看法。

要求：1、內(nèi)容完整，根據(jù)所給提示，描述志愿者工作；

2、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達(dá)流暢；

3、語(yǔ)言無(wú)誤，表述得當(dāng)；

4、80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, volunteer work has become more and more important in our life. _________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Nowadays, volunteer work has become more and more important in our life. Quite a few middle school students join many volunteer groups. They do all kinds of volunteer work to help others. Some go to the old people’s home to help them clean their houses. Some visit the patients in hospital to cheer them up. Others help some primary school students with their schoolwork. Each volunteer brings others help and happiness. And at the same time, when they help others, they get much more. They get thankful words, meaningful experiences and unforgettable happiness. So I would say “Giving is receiving”. Let’s join the volunteers!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)描寫(xiě)關(guān)于志愿者的工作和個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其注意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：Some go to the old people’s home to help them clean their houses. Some visit the patients in hospital to cheer them up. And at the same time, when they help others, they get much more.并且短文用了一些連詞如:when,and等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。