Question

俗話說(shuō)“失去了才懂得珍惜”。時(shí)間過(guò)得很快，你們即將初中畢業(yè)。同學(xué)，你是否在學(xué)習(xí)上有一些讓你感到遺憾或后悔的事情呢？如果在過(guò)去三年中，你某學(xué)科弱；你錯(cuò)過(guò)了很多機(jī)會(huì)；假如再給你一次機(jī)會(huì)，你會(huì)盡最大努力學(xué)習(xí)嗎？比如：課前預(yù)習(xí)、上課聽(tīng)講、及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)、認(rèn)真作業(yè)……

請(qǐng)你以“Give Me One More Chance”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，告訴我們你的想法。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)。

溫馨提示: 1.短文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

2.這些單詞或短語(yǔ)也許對(duì)你有幫助：be weak in，regret(后悔)，what if，never too late to learn，preview（預(yù)習(xí)），practice, go over, as … as possible, try one’s best

Give Me One More Chance

   How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Give Me One More Chance

How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances. What if I had another chance?

As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I had one more chance, I would practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as possible. I would preview lessons before classes, listen carefully in class, go over lessons and finish my homework on time.

I believe where there is a will, there is a way. I will try my best to learn it well.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)，一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:be weak in在某方面不行；what if假使……將會(huì)怎樣；as much as possible盡可能的；go over復(fù)習(xí)；on time按時(shí)；try one’s best to do盡力做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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