Question

書面表達（滿分10分）

假如你是劉紅的老師，劉紅今天因 病沒來上學。請你根據(jù)提示和要求給劉紅發(fā)一封e-mail, 以示關(guān)心。

提示：1 不要著急，遵照醫(yī)囑休息、吃藥

2 以后多鍛煉、必須吃早餐、少吃零食、飲食平衡（have a balanced diet）才會健康

要求：

① 80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

② 文中需包括所有寫作要點，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當加入過渡詞句，使短文通順、連貫。

Dear Liuhong,

Are you feeling better now?____________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

All of us are worrying about you. Please don’t worry. We will help you with your lessons. You’d better have a good rest at home and take medicine as the doctor told you. When you feel better, you should do some exercise and eat breakfast everyday. Breakfast is very important for your health. Try to eat fewer snacks. Have a balanced diet every day and you will be strong and healthy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓我們給劉紅發(fā)一封郵件以示關(guān)心。小作者把要求寫的幾點都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者把列舉的要點都寫了進去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如You’d better have a good rest at home and take medicine as the doctor told you. Have a balanced diet every day and you will be strong and healthy.等好的句式。

考點：提綱類作文。