Question

根據(jù)中文提示，寫一篇60---80 字的文章。

Tom的星期天
上午	活動(dòng)	時(shí)間或時(shí)長(zhǎng)
起床，吃早飯	八點(diǎn)
做作業(yè)	兩個(gè)小時(shí)
玩電腦游戲	半小時(shí)
下午	總喜歡讀書(shū)	一小時(shí)
喝朋友們?cè)诠珗@踢足球	通常兩小時(shí)
回家吃晚飯	五點(diǎn)
晚上	看電視和父母聊天	九點(diǎn)前
去睡覺(jué)	通常在九點(diǎn)半

Tom’s Sunday

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Tom’s Sunday

On Sunday, Tom usually gets up at 8:00 and has breakfast. Then he does his homework for two hours. And he often plays computer games for half an hour. In the afternoon, he always likes reading for one hour. Then he plays football with his friends in the park for two hours and then he goes home for dinner at 5:00. In the evening, he watches TV and talks with his parents before 9:00. He usually goes to bed at 9:30

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間的發(fā)展順序，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，主要介紹了Tom一天的活動(dòng)情況，he often plays computer games for half an hour這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。