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書面表達(dá)（15分）

“餐桌手機(jī)控”是指那些在餐桌上先拍照后用餐、并在用餐過程中扔只關(guān)注手機(jī)的群體。然而，最近發(fā)表的一篇科學(xué)研究表明：分享或關(guān)注食物的照片會使人們對食物的滿意程度下降。此外，“餐桌手機(jī)控”的現(xiàn)象也疏遠(yuǎn)了人與人之間的距離。

請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容，以Not taking photos of food makes us happier為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。

Not taking photos of food makes us happier

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Not taking photos of food makes us happier

Nowadays, we can often see people take out mobiles and take photos when they gather together with family or friends in restaurants. Later they post the photos onto microblog or WeChat, and check the mobiles during the meal.

However, a recent study suggests spending time taking photos of food makes the food less satisfying and it is not good for our health. Besides, checking mobiles all the time doesn’t make people feel close to each other.

So, why not stop taking photos? Let the food be delicious and share your life with people around you.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，敘述的是現(xiàn)在社會存在的想象----在餐桌上給食物拍照。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：when they......;a recent study suggests.....;why not ......?Let the food be......等句式的應(yīng)用。要注意上下文的銜接，這里用了nowadays, later，however, besides, so使句子過渡自然。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了一些社會現(xiàn)象，接下來敘述餐桌上拍照的弊端，最后建議停止給食物拍照。短文用了checking mobiles all the time動名詞短語作主語，用了短語take photos, spend time doing, be good for, stop doing等，增加了句子的亮點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。